Rain
Rain,
Water dropping,
Small explosions of moisture,
Pelting windows,
Fighting umbrellas,
Melting into mud,
Staining the ground,
Filling gutters,
Carrying ducks,
Lifting boats,
Avoiding stomps,
Ageing the sky,
Teasing kids,
Preserving plants,
Pattering on roofs,
Slipping from needles,
Falling,
Falling,
Falling
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That was a really cool peom! It was very descriptive! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThat was a really cool peom! It was very descriptive! Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow I really like your poem! My favorite line was the one about fighting umbrellas! Cool slice!
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool! I love the last few lines and the repetitiveness. Nice!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I liked the repetition!
ReplyDeleteYour description helps me see and hear the rain - beautiful!
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