That Terrible Feeling
That terrible feeling,
When you hear. What happened.
That terrible feeling,
When you go. To see them.
The terrible feeling,
When you cry. Because you don’t know.
That terrible feeling,
When you don’t understand. Why.
That terrible feeling.
When you know. You’ll never see them again.
Once again I dedicate this post to someone. My beloved nanny, Jenny. I love her with all my heart and I miss her all to much.
I like your layout of this slice, nice job! You captured that feeling really well, great job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Willa that this is a really cool layout because it adds a cool visual component to your poem. I also like that you convey the emotion really well. Nice slice!
ReplyDeleteI'm so so sorry. I really hoped she would get better. I love the way you wrote this ad formatted it. Let me know if you want to talk or anything.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written Anika. I share your sadness!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written Anika. I share your sadness!
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