A Light In the Darkness
A figure stood in the darkness,
A sadness surrounding the shape,
As you wonder, it falls together,
A part of you wants to help,
The other is filled with fear,
But you don’t know,
The shadow moves closer,
You realize the space is smaller,
It comes closer,
For you,
For the Light In the Darkness.
This is a cool poem. I could picture what you were talking about. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou set the scene well, without having to describe exactly where they were. I like the rhythm that it keeps. Nice slice!
ReplyDeleteWow. This is super cool you created an awesome picture here. Nice!
ReplyDeleteYour words read like a picture!
ReplyDeleteYour words read like a picture!
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